I think the movement of "addition" works really well, and helps the eye move throughout the composition. I also think it was a good idea to make the word almost completely unrecognizable as they continue to stack on top of each other. It really adds an "endless" feeling to it. "Compression" is more simple, but I think it also expresses the meaning well. I can't tell if you actually made some letters crooked, or if that was just an effect of the letters being so close together; but it worked out since it made it seem almost jumbled.
I think the movement of "addition" works really well, and helps the eye move throughout the composition. I also think it was a good idea to make the word almost completely unrecognizable as they continue to stack on top of each other. It really adds an "endless" feeling to it. "Compression" is more simple, but I think it also expresses the meaning well. I can't tell if you actually made some letters crooked, or if that was just an effect of the letters being so close together; but it worked out since it made it seem almost jumbled.
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